Narrative Writing: Register

Understanding Register

Register refers to the level of formality in language chosen by the writer or speaker in any situation.
Language style isn’t universally fixed; it varies based on context. The register you use when texting friends will differ from the register used in a job interview.
The register is a combination of vocabulary, grammar, punctuation, and pronunciation. Each can be manipulated to create different levels of formality.
Being able to identify and use the appropriate register is a key skill within narrative writing.

There are five common levels of register: frozen, formal, consultative, casual, and intimate.
Frozen register is often scripted, learned by heart, or used in formal settings, like at legal proceedings or in religious texts.
Formal register reflects typical ‘academic’ language. It is not used casually or personally and lacks colloquialism. In written form, it is grammatically strict.
Consultative register is a standard form of communications. Characters might use this in a professional conversation or meeting.
Casual or informal register is used among friends and peers. It may contain informal language and slang.
Intimate register is used for close family and significant others. It’s often full of shared references and may be harder for outsiders to understand.

The choice of register depends on your target audience, the purpose, and the context of your writing.
When writing a narrative, your register should reflect the character’s voice, the environment, and the current situation.
You should also consider how the register can impact the tone and mood of your narrative.
Change in register may depict character development or a change in mood in your narrative.

Proofread your work to ensure the register remains consistent. Changes in register should be deliberate and serve a purpose.
Is the register in line with the character’s personality and the setting of the narrative?
Get external feedback. See if readers are picking up on the nuances in register, and if it’s enhancing or deterring from the overall narrative.