Descriptive Pieces

Descriptive Pieces

Understanding the Approach

  • Doing well in writing descriptive pieces requires a deep understanding of sensory details and imagery.
  • Imagery happens when you paint a vivid picture using your words. It can really help the reader feel immersed in your writing.
  • The secret is to engage all the reader’s senses: sight, sound, touch, taste, and smell.
  • Aim to “show,” not “tell”. Rather than just stating facts, describe situations, objects, or individuals in a way that paints a picture in the reader’s mind.

Sentence Structure

  • Your sentence structure should vary; mix short sentences with long structures to make the text dynamic.
  • Use a variety of tenses where needed to keep the narrative interesting but make sure it’s used accurately.
  • Don’t forget to use correct punctuation – commas, full stops, and paragraphs help to break up the text and make it more readable.

Vocabulary and Language

  • When writing descriptive pieces, strive to use a rich and varied vocabulary. This will help your piece stand out.
  • A strong descriptive piece doesn’t just tell the reader what happened. It uses carefully chosen and expressive words (adjectives and adverbs) to convey emotion, describe scenes, and paint a vivid mental picture.
  • Use similes and metaphors to help create a vivid image in the reader’s mind. For instance, you might say, ‘The sun was like a blazing fireball in the sky,’ rather than just, ‘The sun was bright.’

Culturally Relevant Vocabulary

  • Wherever possible, incorporate words that are specific to the Indonesian culture and context. This will make your piece feel more authentic.

Structure

  • Remember to maintain a clear and organized structure in your descriptive piece. The work should flow smoothly from beginning to end.

Proofread

  • Finally, don’t forget to edit and proofread your work before submitting it. Trim any unnecessary words, correct any errors, and make sure your piece paints a clear and engaging picture for the reader.

Practice

  • Lastly, just like any other writing, the more you practice, the better your descriptive writing will be.